Lillia sketch FAIL

I didnt like it -____________- but Lillia-chan is my fav. character *w* I got to do it, who is she? [link]
she is one of the characters of a new game am playing name "Legacy of Ys" I love that game so much *O* am sorry I forgot turning it :c I was going to make it a "how I draw" video, but my camera is a crap D: and Im not good and photography or videos, so I finish it and it end up like crap ¬¬ Lillia-chan still my fav. character

crappy art- me ¬¬
lillia, Legacy of YS- FALCOM *O*